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"I'm a mess."

"A beautiful mess."
Yello, fellow deviants. 

Enjoy!:iconfecksheeplovesyou:
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Edited Jan 15, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I personally like this A LOT. A 6WS that manages to back a good punch although you have others as well that are equally good :) However the message here appeals to me personally!

Though I personally find the title less catchy than the story itself :XD:
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starlightt1234 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
yeah, i'm pretty rubbish at titles aren't i? :XD:

thanks anyway! :D
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Nah, I wouldn't go that harsh - HOWEVER, I would say that you should work on those :)

You are welcome!
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starlightt1234 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
haha, i think i've been getting better at titles, though they're still harder to make sometimes than the actual poem itself. ;P but yeah, i am working on them. :D
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Well, if a person strives to imporve, at times that is all tat he needs :)
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Thahaseen Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice..:)
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starlightt1234 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! :meow: (thank you for the compliment, as well as the other comments which i will now reply to each and every one of them. ;P)
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Thahaseen Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your welcome! :)
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Eraezr Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice :D Self esteem even when one is a mess.
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starlightt1234 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
it's all on your perspective of things.
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Eraezr Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
true
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gratteloup Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
.....It's ok Man coz i got no self esteem....OOowayoooo...Ooo OOo..Ow 
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starlightt1234 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
hang in there! :(
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BlueSapphire2000 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so pretty! It made my day!
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starlightt1234 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i'm glad it did! :D
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WeissLupus Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Short and sweet and it tells an enitire story :) Well done! :)
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starlightt1234 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much! :aww:
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WeissLupus Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're most welcome! :)
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Tales-of-Tao Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student General Artist
So sweet. :heart:
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starlightt1234 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconfecksheeplovesyou:
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013   Writer
Brilliant.
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starlightt1234 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:flirty:
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is wonderful.  I know this sort of conversation.... :)
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starlightt1234 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
and may i ask what kind of conversation in particular?
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, it's pretty frequent to hear, no matter the conversation.  With *chromeantennae who keeps trying to convince me I'm beautiful and such....
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are.
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
And I love you, more than my heart and soul.
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I feel the same, my love.
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
And, well, *swallows* more than my body, that much is true...
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconhandkissplz: Babe...
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KyoumaH Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice! ^^
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starlightt1234 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! :iconraepfaceplz:
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KyoumaH Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob XD
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