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I am the Earth. You
are the Sun. For without you,
I couldn't exist.
are the Sun. For without you,
I couldn't exist.
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Once upon a time
I reached for the stars
And tried to climb
The sun's golden bars
But those rays of light
Cut short my flight
I reached for the stars
And fell from the sky
My hopes now scars
I can't justify
To myself alone
I am she who has flown
I tried to climb
Like Icarus the son
Melted wax come noontime
With nothing won
No promises made
No trophies gained
The sun's golden bars
Whose sentinels maintained
The ghosts of Mars
Those who remain
Close to my heart
Forever apart
The rays of light
Have faded away
The moon now night
Where the world decays
And I'm still fading
The sun never staying
Cut short my flight
Left behind it all
I try to
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i.
Within blue eyes
anemone and starfish
abound, and seaweed eyelashes
move leisurely with the tides.
At sunset they sparkle,
lined with golden sand
and swirling without a sure direction,
becoming cloudy as a storm brews.
Beware, anger flashes across the surface,
where riptides catch the unwary
ships and sailors, wrecked
and broken amongst its depths.
Only the brave venture in,
attracted by the untameable,
roaring waves and sharp wind.
Eyes stinging, they enter the battle.
Slowly they themselves become blue,
the cold clinging to their skin,
sucking out all their warmth.
Then white as stone,
lips cracked and filled with salt
that leaves a bitter
Literature
Hearsay.
He said.
She said.
I didn't.
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It's from the poll I did a few weeks ago. I meant to edit it, but at this point I just don't feel like it. This is when you're so in love with someone you can't imagine a world without them. Kinda like how the Earth would die out without the Sun.
Emjoy!
It's from the poll I did a few weeks ago. I meant to edit it, but at this point I just don't feel like it. This is when you're so in love with someone you can't imagine a world without them. Kinda like how the Earth would die out without the Sun.
Emjoy!
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactThis is short, powerful, and to the point. As soon as I read it I thought to myself "Yeah! It really IS like that to be in love!", it's summed up in such a way that appeals to my love of the universe as well. It's more unique as a love poem, in my opinion, because of that. If a poem has more of a personalized appeal to a subject, people respond; and I believe you did it quite perfectly if I may say so myself. I wouldn't do anything else to it, in fact!
All in all, splendid job!