Frigid Weather (2/10)

Phew, it’s been a few days since I favourited this piece, but I’m ready to give it a look…

As a simple haiku, one with a 5/7/5 syllable form, let me say you’ve nailed it. I firmly believe in the words you’re trying to communicate, having had a stint in Alaska for a few months and experiencing sub-zero temperatures for a time.

I know the feeling of having your insides seem to freeze up inside of you, having your breath sharply taken from you like a vacuum and being completely out of the sun’s great warmth. TL;DR: It absolutely sucks.

You’ll probably say and mean more in twelve words than many writers will in a lifetime of publishing. For that, I must say a splendid work of poetry, and have this high rating with my blessing. Keep it up!